The Diagram below describes how water is stored and used to produce electricity. Write an academic report indicating the main features and how they are interrelated

The Diagram below describes how water is stored and used to produce electricity. Write an academic report indicating the main features and how they are interrelated
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The diagram illustrates the progress of how
water
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is stored and contributed to electricity,
such
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as hospitals and schools. Generally speaking,
their
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are multiple steps to processing sea
water
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to useful
water
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for society to take
adventage
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advantage
, beginning
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of, beginning
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with solar steaming the sea
water
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into
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the cloud
a cloud
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cloud
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clouds
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and ending
at
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human
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humans
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deviding
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dividing
deciding
to different organisations. As is given in the graph, we can have a closer look at hydro-electric power generation. The first step
starting
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from
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the original
sea
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seawater
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water
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evaporation
then
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become
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to
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apply
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clouds, and it rains, next the
water
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will be collected and involved to
reservoir
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the reservoir
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to be stored.
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thorough
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through
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the circulation includes filtered by
dam
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the dam
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, processed by
valve's
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the valve's
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open and close, turbine and pump. In the next step,
water
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will be transported by
high voltage
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cables to
transformer
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the transformer
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station.
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,
transformer
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the transformer
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station will allocate
water
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to every electricity like factories, agencies, hospitals and educational spaces via underground cables.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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