The graph below shows the information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below shows the information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
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energy
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consumption in the USA from 1980 and provides predictions up to 2030.
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, fossil fuels have been the dominant
energy
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sources
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and are expected to remain the main contributors in the future.
By contrast
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, non-fossil fuels account for smaller proportions,
although
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their use is predicted to rise slightly. In 1980, the USA consumed about 35
quadrillion
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units
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of petrol and oil, compared with 20
quadrillion
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units
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of natural gas and 15
quadrillion
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units
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of coal. Over the following 25 years, all three fossil fuels increased, with petrol and oil reaching 40
quadrillion
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units
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in 2005. Coal rose to 23
units
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,
while
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natural gas grew to 22
units
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. Looking ahead, natural gas is expected to
stabilize
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at around 25
units
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by 2030. Petrol and oil,
however
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, are projected to climb to 49
quadrillion
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units
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, and coal is forecast to reach about 32
quadrillion
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units
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.
On the other hand
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, non-fossil
energy
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sources contributed far less. Nuclear
energy
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began at 4
quadrillion
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units
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in 1980 and rose gradually to around 6
units
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in 2005, with predictions of
further
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growth to about 8
units
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in 2030. Solar and wind
energy
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,
as well as
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hydropower, started at
similarly
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low levels.
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solar and wind are expected to see modest increases to around 6
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, hydropower has remained almost unchanged,
stabilizing
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stabilising
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at about 2
units
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throughout the entire period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, quadrillion, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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