The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram is used to compare the way the
water
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run
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runs
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through
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in
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a different way in an urban setting than in a forest.
Overall
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,
while
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the steps remain the same, the results are different.
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the process is essential to the health of the environment, in urban areas the cycle gives fewer benefits, creating
also
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a more polluted runoff. It starts when the rain falls into the ground, where it penetrates the permeable soil, creating infiltration, which runs down until reaching the less permeable subsoil on rock, where a
water
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table is created. From there,
water
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continues flowing until it reaches the runoff. During
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process, part of the
water
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evaporates and a bigger proportion gets absorbed by trees which
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release oxygen through transpiration.
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the procedure is the same, in urban settings the results are worse. Since permeable soil is covered by asphalt,
water
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cannot reach deeper levels, so there is an
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reduced infiltration which causes a lesser baseflow and
contribute
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to higher erosion.
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, the proportion evaporated and transpired is lower,
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there is a bigger polluted runoff.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Precipitation
  • Absorption
  • Groundwater recharge
  • Evapotranspiration
  • Surface runoff
  • Impervious surfaces
  • Concrete
  • Asphalt
  • Stormwater systems
  • Vegetation
  • Water vapor
  • Local climate conditions
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