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The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented line chart illustrates the
oil
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 produced and consumed by China from 1982 to 2006.
Overall
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, by 1982 the production of
oil
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 was more compared to the consumption
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 the nation started to consume the
oil
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 and production was stable throughout the graph in 2006.
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,
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 utilization rose
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 6
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, manufacturing was only above 3. With regards to the first year, approximately 3
million
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oil
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 barrels were produced per day in 1982.
In contrast
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, the Chinese consumed about two
million
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 tons of
oil
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 per day in the same year.
However
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, yielding of
oil
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 has remained relatively stable between 1982 and 2006. Probing ahead, people started to utilize
oil
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 with time. So, by 2006, the demand for
oil
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 went up by just below 5
million
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 barrels in a day.
Consequently
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, usage had increased up to 4 times in the
last
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 that was almost above six
million
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • oil production
  • oil consumption
  • gradual increase
  • surpass
  • overtake
  • reliance on imports
  • disparity
  • steady rise
  • growing gap
  • significant
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