The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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The bar graph illustrates the data for spending their
income
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per week by the communities in a country in two years, 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, the
income
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spent highest in terms of meals was in 1968
while
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the least was consumed in fuel and power in both years.
However
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, by 2018, people spent more money on leisure activities. With regards to the first year, weekly spending of
income
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by families was at a peak with the 35 percentile in the food sector.
In contrast
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, leisure activities were most in demand in 2018.
Nevertheless
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, people spent almost at the same level, just below 10 per cent on household goods in both years.
Further
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, citizens had utilized just below 5 per cent on fuel and power in 1968 and 2018 as well.
Similarly
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, by 2018 same percentage of the
income
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was spent on personal goods.
Moreover
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, in the
last
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year,
family's
Correct article usage
the family's
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expenditure on accommodation was twice
of
Correct determiner usage
that of
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housing in 1968.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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