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The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of individuals who enrolled in
Use synonyms
science
Correct article usage
the science
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 stream in Malaysia and Singapore.
Overall
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, it is evident that the majority of people chose not to study
science
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,
whereas
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 the least selected
Master's
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a Master's
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 degree to pursue
science
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. By observing the chart, it can be seen that a minor proportion of people are studying master's degree in
science
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 in both countries. A difference of 10% is noticed between the ratio of individuals
in
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with
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 Bachelor's
degree
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degrees
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 in
science
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 in Malaysia and Singapore 10% and 20% respectively. Whilst more people opt for school leaving exams in Malaysia than Singapore recorded 35% and 40%.
Furthermore
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, almost 65% of Malaysian residents have no qualification in
science
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, which is 60%
for
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of
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 Singaporean residents.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words science with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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