You have a spare room in your apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to the Student Accommodation Officer of local college. In your letter, you should tell: - where your apartment is located - when the room will be available - what your requirements for a student to stay there are Begin your letter as follow: Dear…,

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Dear Sir, My name is Shivam. I am writing

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letter to inform you that I have a room available, which I want to rent out to a student. I am a resident of "Silver Society" which is near to the "GK college".

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, there are good transport

facility

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facilities

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. Even a supermarket is

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nearby

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near

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the accommodation. The location of

apartment

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the apartment

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is on

highway25

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Highway 25

, Karnal

city

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. There are some renovation work is continued for the room. From

April1

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April 1

, 2025 room is available.

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this

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, I will provide all the furniture

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bed

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, closet and study table. Not only

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, Wifi is

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included in the rent. Would be kind enough to look

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matter? My requirements are just basic

student

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Students

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should not consume any alcohol.

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, no

pet

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pets

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allowed

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are allowed

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in the house. The

pupil

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age should be over 18. Hoping to hear something positive from your side. Your's Faithfully, Shivam

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coherence and cohesion

Consider breaking up longer sentences for clarity and improving readability.

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Make sure to clearly outline your requirements in a structured format, perhaps using bullet points for better visibility.

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The letter effectively communicates the availability of the room and includes essential details such as furniture and location which is commendable.

coherence and cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately polite, contributing to a positive tone in the letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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