The given graph shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train in the period of time from 1970 to 2030.

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shows the average

number

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of

UK

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commuters

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travelling each day by

car

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,

bus

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or

train

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in the period of time from 1970 to 2030. It is clear from the

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that

traveling

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travelling

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by

car

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was and in

near

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future will still remain the most popular way,

traveling

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travelling

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by

train

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is gradually increasing,

however

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travelling by

bus

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is slightly decreasing in popularity. As

it

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is shown by the

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in the 1970's the average

number

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of

commuters

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going from

a

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point to point by

car

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was just under 6, by

bus

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just above 3 and by

train

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just beneath 3. Moving to the 1980’s

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number

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hasn’t changed much ,

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however

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from

this

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year to the

2000’s

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2000s

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car

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transportation rocketed to about a 7. From 2000 to 2010 the numbers have remained pretty much the same.Talking about the period from 2010 to 2020, the average

number

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of

UK

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commuters

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each day by

bus

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remained unchanged , by

car

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has increased to about 8 and by

train

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has increased drastically and it is predicted that by 2030 will go up even more. It is clear from the

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that in the year

of

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2030 the average

number

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of

commuters

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by

car

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will reach 9,

while

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traveling

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travelling

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by

bus

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will drop to 3. To sum it all

, the

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up, the

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shows the popularity of different transportation methods among

UK

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commuters

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from the

1970's

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1970s

to the

2030's

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2030s

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. The most popular vehicle is

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car

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a car

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and will remain so in 2030,

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travelling by

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popularity is experiencing

slight

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a slight

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downfall. Graphs of the average

number

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of

UK

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commuters

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travelling by

car

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and

train

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are similar,

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however

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however,

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the

number

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of individuals

traveling

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travelling

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by

train

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are

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about

an

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half of the size of those travelling by

car

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.