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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The table graphs illustrate the value of one country's exporting
trade
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 in
petroleum
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, engineering goods,
gems
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 and
jewellery
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, agricultural
products
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 and textiles and the changes in their
trade
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 in 2015 and 2016.
Overall
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, it is evident that the majority of
trade
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 earnings were from the export of
petroleum
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 and engineered
products
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,
whereas
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 the
trade
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 of all categories increased except
gems
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 and
jewellery
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 which decreased over time. By observing the chart, it can be seen that almost $60
billion
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 was earned from
petroleum
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products
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 in 2015 and 2016. The sales of engineered goods were $60
billion
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 in 2016, which was $58
billion
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 in 2015. A minor difference of $1
billion
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 was noticed in the export earnings of
gems
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 and
jewellery
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 in 2015 and 2016 $41 and $40
billion
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. Whilst the income from agricultural
products
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 remained the same accounted
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31
billion
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.
However
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, the business earnings from textiles grew from $28
billion
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 to $31
billion
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 in 2016.
Furthermore
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, a minimal change of 0.81% and a major variation of 15.24% was observed in agricultural
products
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 and textiles. Meanwhile, the value of
gems
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 and
jewellery
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 decreased by 5.18% in both years.
Petroleum
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 and engineered goods surged by 3% and 8.5% in 2015-2016.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words trade, petroleum, gems, jewellery, products, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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