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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
percantage
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percentage
 of British individuals giving cash to charity by different
age
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 groups between 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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 , it is clearly seen that the proportion of donations varied across different
age
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 groups over the two decades. In 1990 ,
36
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the 36
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-50 years old group was the highest
percantage
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percentage
 of charitable
donation
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donations
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,
whereas
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in
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, in
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 2010, older
age
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 groups contributed more significantly. In 1990, the 36-50
age
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 group had the highest
percantage
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percentage
 of donors, with around 42% of individuals giving money to charity. The 51-65
age
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 group followed closely , with approximately 35% donating. Meanwhile , younger individuals aged 18-25 contributed the least, at just over 15%

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charitable donations
  • age range/bracket/group
  • percentage (%)
  • 20-year period
  • British people
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • significant change
  • donation patterns
  • remained stable
  • highest/lowest
  • observe
  • compare
  • summarize
  • comment on
  • relevant features
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