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The chart below shows the Japan’s population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. AT LEAST 150 WORDS

The chart below shows the Japan’s population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. AT LEAST 150 WORDS
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The graph illustrates the
population
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 of Japan categorized by age groups,
such
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 as 0-14
group
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, 25-64
group
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, and 65+
group
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, between 1960 and 2040.
Overall
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, the trend for all groups varied, with the elderly people's
population
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 projected to increase significantly by the end of the period. In 1960, the 25-64
group
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 was around 65%, remaining relatively stable compared to the other groups.
However
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, the
population
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 of the 25-64
generation
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 is expected to decrease slightly to approximately 55% by 2030 and recover to just 59% by 2040.
On the other hand
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,the 0-14
group
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 showed a steady decline,
while
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 the 65+
group
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 increased sharply. The 65+
generation
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 started with the lowest proportion at about 5%, increasing steadily and surpassing the 0-14
group
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 by the 2005s at 20%.
In contrast
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, the young people's
population
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 showed a fluctuation from 30% in 1960 to just 15% in 2020. Notably, the 0-14
generation
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 is expected to see a continuous decline to almost 10% until 2040. In summary, 25-64 people are predicted to remain the majority of the
population
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,
whereas
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 the over-65 age
group
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 will come in
second,
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and the 0-14 age
generation
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 will come in third.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, group, generation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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