The graph below gives information on the usage of water for agricultural purposes in two different countries between 2000 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information on the usage of water for agricultural purposes in two different countries between 2000 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the consumption of water for agricultural reasons in both

Australia

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and Russia, in Cubic

Meters

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, throughout the period 2000 to 2010.

Overall

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while

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the two

countires

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countries

exhibited different trends over the given period (10

years

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), they all experienced an

overall

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upward trajectory.

However

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, the pace of growth varied, with some countries demonstrating a more rapid increase than the other. As the graph shows,

Australia

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commenced at 500

meters

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in 2000 and it remain stable in the next three

years

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. Followed by,

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dramatic

rose

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rise

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till the end of the period, until it reached 2000 m3.

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, even though

Australia

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increased throughout the

years

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it is still below Russia.

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Russsia

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Russia

began with a higher amount than

Australia

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, with 1000 Cubic

Meters

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and as the line shows a growing trend in the first 3

years

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then

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it fell down till 2007;

after

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this

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event, It rapidly climbed till 2010, with approximately 2250

Meters

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, meters, years with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

159 words

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