The graph below gives information on the usage of water for agricultural purposes in two different countries between 2000 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the usage of water for agricultural purposes in two different countries between 2000 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information on the usage of water for agricultural purposes in two different countries between 2000 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the consumption of water for agricultural reasons in both
Australia
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and Russia, in Cubic
Meters
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, throughout the period 2000 to 2010. 
Overall
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,
while
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the two
countires
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countries
exhibited different trends over the given period (10
years
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), they all experienced an
overall
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upward trajectory.
However
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, the pace of growth varied, with some countries demonstrating a more rapid increase than the other.  As the graph shows,
Australia
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commenced at 500
meters
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in 2000 and it remain stable in the next three
years
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. Followed by,
an
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a
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dramatic
rose
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till the end of the period, until it reached 2000 m3.
However
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, even though
Australia
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increased throughout the
years
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it is still below Russia. 
On the other hand
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,
Russsia
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Russia
began with a higher amount than
Australia
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, with 1000 Cubic
Meters
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and as the line shows a growing trend in the first 3
years
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,
then
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it fell down till 2007;
after
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this
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event, It rapidly climbed till 2010, with approximately 2250
Meters
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, meters, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
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