Write to the company’s manager about construction near your home. In your letter: * how you heard of their construction plans * what you think of their plans * your hopes for the construction in case it pushes through

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction

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the service you are providing. As I purchased a

radio

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from your stores,

however

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, it stopped working suddenly. I

have

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apply

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sent it back to the shop three days ago, and they promised to repair it and call me back within two days. unfortunately, it has been a week now and I

did

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have

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not

receive

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received

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any call from them. Will you please clarify the reason

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for

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this

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delay? and for how long it may take

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I believe they should contact me to explain what happened. I request to repair the

radio

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as soon as possible as I am leaving the city next week, and I need to take the

radio

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with me.

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, I suggest to compensate me with a new

radio

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if repairing

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one will take more time. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Wafa A

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure the letter includes a clear introduction and conclusion to improve overall coherence.

task achievement

Consider adjusting the tone in the introduction to be more constructive rather than dissatisfactory to better suit a professional correspondence.

positive

The letter is polite and maintains a formal tone, which is appropriate for a complaint letter.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

construction
plans
concerns
infrastructure
community
facilities
disruption
pollution
traffic congestion
improvements
property value
neighborhood
engagement
feedback
outcome
opportunities
local news
community meetings
residence
wildlife

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Write to the company’s manager about construction near your home. In your letter: * how you heard of their construction plans * what you think of their plans * your hopes for the construction in case it pushes through

In the future all cars ,buses and trucks will be driver less.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driver less vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some children spent more hours on smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people think that children should receive formal training at school on how to be good parents in the future. Do you agree or disagree with this statement??

Few people or some people believe that the government should provide benefits to the unemployed people whereas others believe the opposite.Please state your opining.