The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrated above depict the differences in the
park
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between the year 1920 and the current time.
Overall
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, the area of the
park
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has changed drastically with more visitor-friendly facilities and
in contrast
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, fewer
garden
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spaces making it less green.
According to
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the diagram, it seems that all seats at the corners of the
park
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have moved to the central area on the four sides of the new rose
garden
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replacing the old fountain. the top right rose
garden
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was
also
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demolished and gave its place to a cafe left of the children's play area which was once a pond for water plants.
Furthermore
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, on the bottom
side
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of the part was a rose
garden
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on the right which doesn't exist anymore and
also
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the right
side
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has a water feature replacing the old glasshouse. Regarding the smaller changes, the two entrances on the upper
side
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and the lower
side
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of the schematic are unchanged connecting the place to northern Arnold Avenue and southern Eldon Street but in the meanwhile, An underground car parking exists in today's plot of
this
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park
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.
Additionally
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, the stage has remained in the same place
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but converted from a tiny stage for musicians to a bigger concert amphitheatre.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, garden, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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