The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
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The bar chart illustrates 10 different countries which use and
producethelectricity
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produce the electricity
most in 2014. Units are measured in billion kWh.
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, the largest amount of
electricity
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was both used and produced in China and The USA,
while
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Germany and Korea did not contribute that much. Moving to a more detailed analysis, China had the largest number of usage(5,322) and
manifacturing
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manufacturing
(5,398) of
electricity
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. The USA ranked
second,
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with accounting for 4,000. Ruia and Japan
also
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had
significant
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position in generating and consuming
electricity
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, at nearly 1,000 and 900 respectively. These were followed by India,
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generating 871 and using 699.
On the other hand
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, Canada and France produced about 600 and used more than 450. Germany
were
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responsible for 582 in
usage
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the usage
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of
electricity
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, which was 100 higher than
consumption
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the consumption
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of Brazil.
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, both of them comprised
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almost the same amount of producing(approximately 530). Korea
was
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lowest
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the lowest
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rates among all 10 countries
by
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producing 485 and consuming 450.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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