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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •say where you think you left the paper •explain why they are so important •tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Manager, I hope you are doing well my purpose of writing
this
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 letter
to
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is to
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 inform you that one month ago I visited
at
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apply
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your hotel on 24 March for
meeting
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a meeting
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 purpose. My meeting started from 11a.m. till 2 p.m. We were 20 people who
attend
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attended
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 the meeting. I personally booked your conference room number 13 on 17 March. On the same day
while
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 I reserved the hall I paid all the payments
through
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online.
This
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 was not the first time when I booked your hall before
this
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 I booked so many times. After attending that meeting when I returned home, I felt that I
forget
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had forgotten
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 some important
papers
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in
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from
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 that meeting. I
vivdely
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vividly
 know that I left the
papers
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 inside
desk
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a desk
the desk
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 drawer.
Actually
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Actually,
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 It was
very
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a very
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 important
documents
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document
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 where I
write
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wrote
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 down the
keypoints oh
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key points of
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 the meeting and mentioned all my upcoming meeting
schedule
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schedules
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. Kindly check that conference hall again and consult with your
resptionist
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receptionist
 if they
recieve
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receive
 any missing documents or paper from that room. I hope you will try to find my
crusial
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crucial
papers
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 and inform me
on
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of
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given
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the given
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 contact number and I will come and
colllect
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collect
 my
papers
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. Always you and your staff
provide
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always provide
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 good services I
appriciate
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appreciate
 your hard work and
wait
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am waiting for
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 your reply.
Your
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Yours
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 Sincerely, Anju

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coherence and cohesion
Try to clearly separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea to improve coherence.
task achievement
Make sure to proofread your letter for spelling errors and grammatical inaccuracies. For example, use 'receptionist' instead of 'resptionist' and 'appreciate' instead of 'appriciate'.
task achievement
You provide a clear explanation of the situation and the importance of the documents, which is essential for task completion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • conference room
  • crucial
  • documentation
  • sensitive information
  • work-related
  • necessary
  • urgent
  • retrieve
  • lost and found
  • appreciate
  • contact details
  • assistance
  • polite
  • greeting
  • importance of the papers
  • upcoming deadlines
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