The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate
proportion
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the proportion
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of
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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in
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house works
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housework
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in two categories, in which, the first
table
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includes
number
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a number
the number
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of
men
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and
women
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who do
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house works
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housework
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,
while
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the other shows how much
time
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they
spent
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spend
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.
According to
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tables
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the tables
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,
it is clear that
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more
men
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and
women
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do cooking rather than other
works
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work
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,
also
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, they spend more
time
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on that.
On the other hand
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,
less
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fewer
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of them do
house
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repairs and do it less than other activities. Noticing
first
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the first
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table
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, it is obvious that more percentage of
women
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do
houseworks
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housework
. Alternatively, more than 80 per cent of them cook and more than 60 per cent of them do
house
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cleaning activities,
while
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these numbers for
man
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men
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is only 60 and 40 per cent.
However
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, males are
leader
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leaders
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for pet
cares
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care
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and
house
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repair.
Secondly
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,
other
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another
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table
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evidences that
overall
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time
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spent in household activities is regarded
to
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by
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women
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.
Furthurmore
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Furthermore
, likely the
last
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table
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, they spend more than 80
percent
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per cent
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of their daily
time
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on cooking and cleaning,
while
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men
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do more
house
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repairs.
Additionally
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, they do pet
cares
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care
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as much as
men
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do.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words house, table, men, women, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 6 times.
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