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The table shows the percentage of government expenditure on health care in five countries in 2006 as well as the proportions of 24-30-year-olds working in medical services. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the percentage of government expenditure on health care in five countries in 2006 as well as the proportions of 24-30-year-olds working in medical services. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information about the
percentege
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percentage
 of public spending
to
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on
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 health services and
proportion
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the proportion
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 of aged between 24 and 30 years old people working in
sanction
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the sanction
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 field. Generally, the country making the most
the
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apply
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expenditure was Italy,
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however
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 Poland showed the lowest expenditure ,
conversely
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 ,
majority
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the majority
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 of these
peoples
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people
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, even over
of
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apply
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half ,
aged
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were aged
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 from 24 to 30.

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