The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

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The pie charts provide key information about the change

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production

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across different sectors between the years 2040 and 2060. The units are measured in percentage.

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, it is clear from the graph that there will

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considerable increase in the Manufacturing

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, the Materials and Info-Com Tech will experience a growth in the

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whereas

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the Energy and Agriculture will see

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According to

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what is shown, in 2040, services will be a major

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with slightly under

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half of the

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. Manufacturing will represent nearly a

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Info-Com Tech might

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a quarter, and Materials will

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the smallest share at 3 per cent. In terms of 2060, Services will grow to represent 41% of

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becoming the most significant

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. Manufacturing will increase slightly to a

third,

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and Info-Com Tach will

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to 16

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Conversely

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, a decrease

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5 percent will

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in Energy, and Agriculture will continue to be the smallest

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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161 words

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