The given pie charts illustrate the average house expenses between two Asian nations in 2010.
Overall
, Linking Words
according
the given data, Add the preposition
according to
Use synonyms
Japan
dwellers spend more on transport, health care and Replace the word
Japanese
on
other Change preposition
apply
good
and services than Malaysians. Fix the agreement mistake
goods
However
, Malaysian Linking Words
sitizens
pay more for housing and food.
Correct your spelling
citizens
To begin
with, in 2010, Japanese people Linking Words
pay
21% for house rent, Wrong verb form
paid
whereas
Malaysians Linking Words
spend
noticeably more, Wrong verb form
spent
near
35%, making it the largest Change the word
nearly
expenses
among all sectors. Fix the agreement mistake
expense
Also
, expenditures in Malaysia for food Linking Words
higher
than in Add a missing verb
are higher
Japan
Use synonyms
that
accounted for 27%, Correct pronoun usage
which
when
Correct word choice
while
Use synonyms
japan
citizens spend a little less by 3% (24%).
Regarding Replace the word
Japanese
to
the services, Japanese people pay markedly more. Transport in Remove the preposition
apply
Japan
is much more expensive (20%), Use synonyms
while
expenditures in Malaysia Linking Words
is
less Correct subject-verb agreement
are
in
Change preposition
than
a
double (10%). Other Correct article usage
apply
good
and services Fix the agreement mistake
goods
Linking Words
also
higher in Add a missing verb
are also
Japan
, accounting for 29% which makes it the largest proportion, Use synonyms
while
Malaysian dwellers pay 26% Linking Words
Linking Words
that
is the third-largest sector. In Correct pronoun usage
which
a
contrast, the smallest figure in a breakdown in both countries Correct article usage
apply
attributed
to Add a missing verb
is attributed
the
health care where Correct article usage
apply
its
Correct pronoun usage
apply
account
Replace the word
accounting
to
6% in Change preposition
for
Japan
and 3% in Malaysia.Use synonyms
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