You have an appointment with your bank manager, but you cannot attend the meeting. You are writing to him to make another appointment. In your letter • Apologize for any inconvenience • Explain why you cannot attend this meeting • Make an appointment for another meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Mr. William I am writing to you to postpone our meeting which should be at 1pm, today. I apologise for
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inconvenience, as I understand how busy your working day is and how important for us
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meeting. Some changes happened to our plan for my company. That's why is, I have to go abroad for a meeting and it is more important for my company's future.
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wanted to solve
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problem via another person
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I must have
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with you, as you know it is necessary to build
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relationship with your bank.
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if I deal with
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customer, we will make a bigger plan about the mortgage. As you see I can not attend
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meeting today. If you see fit to make another appointment,
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with you at 2pm next Monday thank you in advance for your understanding, Best regards, Deniz Y.

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coherence and cohesion
Consider using clearer transitions between ideas to improve the flow of your letter.
task achievement
Ensure sentences are grammatically correct and concise for better clarity.
task achievement
You effectively expressed your apology and explained the reason for rescheduling the meeting.
coherence and cohesion
Your closing is polite and appropriate, which reflects well on your professionalism.
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