The line graph shows the production levels of the main fuels in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

The line graph shows the production levels of the main fuels in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
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The line graph presents data on the output volumes of three primary energy sources—petroleum, coal, and natural gas—in the United Kingdom over a 19-year period, from 1981 to 2000.
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, petroleum remained the predominant energy resource, exhibiting a largely upward trajectory.
In contrast
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, coal experienced a significant decline,
whereas
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the generation of natural gas showed a consistent and steady rise. At the outset, petroleum and coal commenced at around 85 and 80
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respectively,
while
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natural gas was substantially lower, at approximately 35
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. Petroleum production escalated swiftly, peaking at nearly 140
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in the late 1980s, and maintained a relatively high level, closing the period at close to 150
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. Coal,
on the other hand
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, saw a sharp downturn in the mid-1980s, recovered slightly for a short interval, but
then
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diminished steadily, finishing just
finishing just
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under 40
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by the end of the period.
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, natural gas output grew consistently, demonstrating a reliable and uninterrupted upward trend.

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