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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.dung

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.dung
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The pie chart compares the
energy
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 produced by different
sources
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 in France in the years 1995 and 2005 with the help of percentages.
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, production of the coal is highest in both years
while
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 the other
sources
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 of
energy
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 are generating the lowest in
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quantity.
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, coal was used the most(29.80%) in the year 1995,
similarly
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 gas and petrol were used almost in similar quantity to generate
energy
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 which is 29.63%, and 29.27% respectively. Nuclear
energy
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 was a marginally smaller (6.40%) source than the former
sources
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. The use of other
sources
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 was only 4.90%. Coal (30.93%) and gas (30.31%) were observed to have an increase of approximately 1% of usage in the year 2005.
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, petrol is witnessed to have a reduction of approximately 10% resulting in 19.55% of the use to produce
energy
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. Nuclear
sources
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 (10.10%) and other
sources
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 (9.10%) have of difference of exactly 1% for
energy
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 production.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, sources with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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