Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country and stay from January 31st to February 10th. Write them a letter. In your letter: Make plans to meet them at a convenient location specify a time and date suggest some activities you may all participate in during their visit

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Dear Tricia, Hope you are doing well! I am surprised to hear that you are visiting my place

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in toronto

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toronto

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Toronto

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for

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of weeks. I am really happy that we getting a chance to meet again after years. The weather will be pleasant during your stay. You told me about

your

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hotel in which you are going to stay

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2 hours away

form

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my place. But on 4th and 5th February I am free and we can plan to meet. If you want I can pick you

from

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up from

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your hotel and we can start our day with yummy breakfast and take you to some historical places and make

most

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of that time. My parents

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knew about your visit

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Toronto and they are eager to meet you. It will be great if you can plan

couple

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of days to stay at my place. My mother will be really happy to give you a taste of traditional food. And during those days you can get a flavour of local life in my town

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that we can

cheerish

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cherish

some old days when we used to stay together. Looking forward to see you soon. Yours Sincerely Ashima Gulati

gulati.ashima7Tue Apr 08 2025

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language

Try to correct some minor spelling mistakes, like 'toronto' should be 'Toronto' and 'form' should be 'from'.

coherence

Consider breaking longer sentences into shorter ones for better clarity and flow, especially in the first paragraph.

content

You have included personal touches in your letter, such as mentioning your parents and the traditional food, which adds warmth and friendliness to your tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

199 words

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

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