The bar chart below shows the salt intake of men and women in different age groups in a country in Europe in 2019.

The bar chart below shows the salt intake of men and women in different age groups in a country in Europe in 2019.
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The picture illustrates how much flavouring consumption by each gender either men or women in a variety of groups in Europe for a particular country in 2019. Most of the condiment was consumed by age groups of adult men and women. The child group had the lowest and safest amount of eating savour because of the recommended limitation. The highest salt intake was an adult group of 30-38 years old men and women which was approximately 4000 for females and above 5000 milligrams per day. The second was at 40-49 above the limit of the daily intake which was about 3000-4500 when the limit is 2300. The little difference below the adult group was old people, the oldest male and female how 70+ years old took little amount that was 2000 and almost 4000. Sodium was taken by the kids and the teenage class had lower than other age groups.
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the lowest by kids at 2-5 years old approximately 2000 milligrams per day below the limit daily people consume which is advised.

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  • salt intake
  • age groups
  • men
  • women
  • bar chart
  • trend
  • significant differences
  • consume
  • notable
  • variations
  • highest
  • lowest
  • implications
  • health
  • long-term effects
  • recommendations
  • demographics
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