The first chart below shows the number of airline crew (pilots, stewards etc) needed to fly a passenger plane between Australia and a number of other countries. The second chart shows the number of passenger complaints per plane journey made on these routes, and average kilogram (kg) weight of luggage (or baggage) carried per passenger.

The presented bar charts represent the number of airlines’ crews and complaints per flight,

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the

weight

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of their

baggages

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baggage

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between Australia and 4 nations. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that

German

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Germany

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had the highest number of individuals working in planes and

travelers

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travellers

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its

weight

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was the lowest compared

other

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countries. Focusing on the crews,

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first place was Germany contributing more than 14 workers consisting

pilots

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of pilots

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, stewards, etc., followed by Indonesia 4 lower.

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, Malaysia had 2 officers higher than New Zealand at 6. Turning to the rest of the categories, both Germany and Indonesia had a high contrast between the

weight

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of

luggages

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luggage

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and complaints at more than 30.

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, Malaysia had fewer than them, contributing 25 difference between the officials and the

weight

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.

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, even though New Zealand had the lowest

passangers'

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passengers

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complaints, they carried the most significant

killograms

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kilograms

of belongings.