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The line chart provides information regarding the number of visitor to and from United Kingdom over two decades from 1979 to 1999 while the bar chart illustrates the country's popularity rated based on their UK visitors number.

The line chart provides information regarding the number of visitor to and from United Kingdom over two decades from 1979 to 1999 while the bar chart illustrates the country's popularity rated based on their UK visitors number.
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The graphs illustrate the number of tourists who visited abroad by the
UK
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-dwellers and visits to the
UK
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 by international
travellers
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 between 1979 and 1999 and the information of the
UK
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 residents who visited five different countries in 1999, including Turkey, Greece, Spain, France, and the US. In terms of visits to and from the
UK
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, travelling abroad by
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the
UK
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 by overseas individuals started at approximately 130,000 and 100,000, respectively.
Travellers
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 with the
UK
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 nationality increased slightly to 200,000 by 1984,
then
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 grew more rapidly compared to their previous level, reaching a peak of around 530,000 in 1999.
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travellers
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overseas nationality showed a gradual upward trend, increasing only moderately to just over 250,000 by 1999. Regarding the below graph, France was the most common nation and recorded 100,000 people in 1999.
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, Spain came in
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 but showed approximately 90,000. Meanwhile, Turkey, Greece, and the USA saw similar figures, showing 25,000, 30,000, and 40,000, respectively.
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travellers
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abroad increased significantly over the period,
while
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 France had the highest figures
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UK
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 visitors in 1999.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, travellers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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