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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
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The illustration displays the layout of a public library that has
experinced
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experienced
experience
 changes within a
20 year
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 span as a comparison to what it appears
to
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today.
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, the library has undergone several significant modifications. It appears more modern and now offers improved
room
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 structure and better use of space. 20 years ago, Tables and chairs
are
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 placed directly
infront
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in front
 of the entrance right from the entrance but now have been removed.
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Adult non-
fiction
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 and
fiction
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books
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 used to be segregated back in the given period, but today there is only a
room
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 dedicated
for
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 Adult
fiction
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books
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.
In addition
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 to that, that same
room
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 has now installed newly
constracted
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constructed
contracted
 Self-service machines. Opposite
to
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that, is now the All
reference
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books
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room
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 which was once the Adult
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fiction
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Fiction Books
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books
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room
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.
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, a new Cafe has been built
instead
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 of the Enquiry desk which was once used to book tickets and return
books
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. The CDs, videos,
computer
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 games
room
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 has undergone the most drastic change
especially
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 to how spacious it is now. It is now the new Children's
fiction
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books
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room
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 in which
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storytelling events take place with
nicely
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a nicely
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 placed Sofa in each corner of the
room
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. The reading
room
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 is simply more modernized
has
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as
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 it is a computer
room
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 now

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, fiction, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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