Some people think that all university students should study whatever course they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The problem of whether or not students should prefer
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courses
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debate. Some individuals argue that it is necessary for society to prepare qualified experts.
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, I contend that
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a variety
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of
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fill of needs. There are several reasons why
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maintain the idea of domination
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some directions,
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as science or engineering with the main one being that developing industries often rise and experience deficiency.
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, nowadays there is a lack of employees who specialise
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informational technologies. In
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countries as China,
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and Germany, there are intensive streams of programmers, online security agents etc. from
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world.
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, there is a logic, that as more there will be science workers, as more there will be innovations and inventions.
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the other hand,
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to mix all
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in one bowl may lead to destructive consequences, when most of them will be out of
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the 1960's
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USSR tried to ameliorate
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agriculture.
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a lot of
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came to Kazakhstan and cultivated crops with alacrity.
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, excessive
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had destroyed soil and
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had failed.
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most
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machine operators, agronomists and
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had lost their perspectives. Another cogent example is a tendency to study jurisprudence or economics
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when most
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the alumnuses
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alumni
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could not find a place in the
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market
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because
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sphere was overfilled.
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,
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also
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needs
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who will work in specialized works, so that
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should get education in the order of needs of the society.
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, it is important to improve spheres, which help
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and where
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a
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lot
of minds.
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to educate
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only in several directions may
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to disbalance, where a lot of them will not find an opportunity to use their specialization
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so
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it will be better
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if
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will study
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the courses
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they think they need.

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Make sure that all arguments and paragraphs have a clear and logical flow, linking ideas more effectively with transition phrases.
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You present a balanced view of both perspectives, which is important for this type of essay.
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