The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram displays the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.
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, there are 4 main stages in a Monarch butterfly's life - egg, larval, pupal, and
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adult
. The whole cycle takes around 7 months to complete. The life of Monarch butterflies begins with eggs which are laid on milkweed. 14 days later, these eggs are newly hatched and become
larva
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which will
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grow to be
caterpillar
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caterpillars
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. The aforementioned steps are in the same place which is on milkweed. At
larval
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the larval
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stage,
caterpillar
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caterpillars
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transform themselves to be in attachments
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larva
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and
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requires around 10 days before being chrysalises. After entering a pupal stage, the chrysalises emerge to be adults and
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migrate to the south. 6 months later, they migrate again but to the north.
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Finally
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they mate and lay eggs, making the whole cycle
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again.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • life cycle
  • Monarch butterfly
  • eggs
  • milkweed plants
  • larvae
  • caterpillars
  • feed
  • chrysalis
  • pupa
  • metamorphosis
  • emerge
  • adult butterfly
  • repeat
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