The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
production
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levels of three major fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2000 including
petroleum
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, coal and natural
gas
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.
Overall
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,
petroleum
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consistently remained the most produced fuel
while
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coal gradually declined and natural
gas
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experienced steady growth. At the beginning of the period,
petroleum
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started at around 95 energy
units
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and rose sharply until the mid-1980s, reaching a peak of about 140
units
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.
Although
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it declined in the early 1990s,
petroleum
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production
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recovered in the mid-1990s and remained relatively stable near 140
units
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by 2000.
In contrast
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, coal
production
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dropped significantly after 1982, falling from 80
units
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to about 35 by 1984.
Although
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it showed a slight recovery mid-decade, coal continued its downward trend through 2000. Natural
gas
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was the lowest in 1981 at under 40
units
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. It remained flat until 1990,
then
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began to rise steadily by surpassing coal in the early 1990s. By 2000, its
production
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approached 100
units
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.
This
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trend shows a clear shift in preference from coal to natural
gas
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over time.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum, gas, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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