The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data presented in the chart gives us an insight into the journey to school by students from 11 to 16 years old over a year in the UK .
Overall
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, it is evident that the children had opted to walk for 0-1
miles
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,and for over 5
miles
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, the
bus
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stood in the first place. Looking in detail,
the
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at the
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distance of 0-1
miles
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,pupils preferred 90% of travel by walking and 50% by bicycle , 10% by
car
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and
least
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the least
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by
bus
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with 5% .
Whereas
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for 1-2
miles
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, 60% had travelled by walking
then
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bicycle was on top with 80% followed by
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car
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a car
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with 20% and 10% by
bus
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.
Moreover
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,
the
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for the
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distance of 2-5
miles
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,trainees
choosed
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chose
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bus
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and bicycle with 50% and 48% respectively
then
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by
car
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with 30% and by walking with 25%.
Lastly
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, over 5
miles
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, students mostly travelled by
bus
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with 60% and by
car
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with just 30% .

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words miles, bus, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Modes of transportation
  • Percentage
  • Comparative analysis
  • Seasonal variations
  • External factors
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon emissions
  • Non-motorized modes
  • Safety
  • Convenience
  • Sustainable
  • Initiatives
  • Promoting
  • Improvements
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