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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
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The bar chart illustrates the duration of telephone calls, measured in
minutes
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, in the United Kingdom for three different categories between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
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, it is evident that
while
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 the duration of local calls made via fixed lines fluctuated throughout
this
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 period, the figures for national and international calls made by both fixed lines and mobile phones showed a consistent increase. In 1995, the
minutes
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 allocated to local calls by fixed line were just above 70
billion
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.
This
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 number gradually increased, reaching a peak of 90
billion
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 in 1999, before experiencing a slight decline back to around 70
billion
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 in 2002, matching the levels at the beginning of the period. Despite
this
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 fluctuation, local calls remained the most popular option during these years.
Conversely
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, national and international calls made via fixed lines began at just under 40
billion
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minutes
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 in 1995 and saw a steady rise to 60
billion
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minutes
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 by 2002.
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, the most notable growth was observed in mobile calls for all categories, which started at nearly 2
billion
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minutes
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 and ended at approximately 45
billion
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minutes
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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