You stayed in a hotel and was not satisfied with service. Write a letter to manager. - why you chose this hotel - what problems did you face - tell the manager what to do

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Tom I hope

this

Linking Words

letter finds you well. I saw your advertisement online. I am interested in

this

Linking Words

advertisement. The hotel opened an international corporation.

Also

Linking Words

, I chose the house for the main reason.

This

Linking Words

house opened a

long

Add an article

a long

show examples

time ago. I relaxing ancient hostel. The ancient hostel was more comfortable for me.Because I enjoy your favourite subject history. There it has a lot of old equipment.

This

Linking Words

dump collaboration has the symbols of various countries. Let's begin with a look at the problems of moving. One of the main problems with

this

Linking Words

dump is no quick maintenance. Especially at night.In some cases no account at all. The situation there gives me discomfort.

However

Linking Words

, it

is not so lade

Change the verb form

is not so laded

show examples

.Maybe because it is an old dump.I tell the manager and encourage the employees or bring high salaries

then

Linking Words

they may be quickly serviced. The hostel should increase the number of employees. You should listen to the opinions of every guest. If you focus on employee benefits that all depends on your benefits. I look forward to receiving from you. Keldiyorov Muzaffar

uluga2002Mon Apr 14 2025

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence and cohesion

Consider rephrasing some sentences to improve clarity and coherence. For example, the reasons for choosing the hotel could be organized more clearly.

task achievement

Make sure to address the manager more directly and structure your problems in a clear manner to enhance your overall message.

task achievement

You provided a personal reason for choosing the hotel, which adds a nice touch.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

179 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
In many countries, individuals or their employers pay for medical treatment. Should the government be more responsible for the health of their citizens? Discuss and give your opinion.
Some people believe that all governments must provide their citizens with free medical treatments instead of health insurance which employers usually give to their workers, whereas others do not agree with that. While I believe that all medical treatments should be free and available for all classes in the country, plastic surgeries are not included in it.
6
band
In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industries and construction. what measure can be taken to prevent it.
Advanced industries and construction work are proof that a nation is well developed; however, such development can result in unfortunate conditions like air and water pollution. Nonetheless, there are some measures that governments and societies can take to help prevent such tragedies.
7.5
band
You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: – Explain why you are writing – Explain why you have decided to leave the company – Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment
I am writing this letter to inform you about my intention to quit your company. Although, it has been a great moment working over the past two years in your organization, however, I think it's time I moved on.
6
band
Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or exper
In this day and night, competition has established its roots in all ways of life. A section of society vehemently deems that being cutthroat has heinous effects on students' lives, whereas others assert that being competitive motivates learners to accomplish their dreams. Although this essay will scrutinize both perspectives in the forthcoming paragraphs, I concur with both views.
6.5
band
Learning English at school is often seen as more important than local languages.If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?
English is a gateway to the world and no one should be deprived of the opportunities that arise for those with a strong command of the English language. This does not mean that local languages are dispensable, however. They have an important role to play in supporting education, including English language education.

You stayed in a hotel and was not satisfied with service. Write a letter to manager. - why you chose this hotel - what problems did you face - tell the manager what to do

The Closing

In many countries, individuals or their employers pay for medical treatment. Should the government be more responsible for the health of their citizens? Discuss and give your opinion.

In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industries and construction. what measure can be taken to prevent it.

You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: – Explain why you are writing – Explain why you have decided to leave the company – Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than local languages.If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?