The line graph shows the percentage of travels by 4 different transports in one country between 1985 and 2015

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The line chart provides key information about 4 types of transport systems used

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travelling in one country between 1985 and 2015. The units are measured in percentage.

Overall

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, it is clear from the graph that car usage has experienced growth in the transport system.

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, the proportion of rail users was consistently higher.

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, the bus remained the lowest.

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what is shown, car transport started at around 30% in 1985 and rose steadily till reaching a peak of 85% in 2000 and showed a decline in 2015 by 70%.

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, Rail followed a

conversely

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trend, declining from 10% in 1995 and

then

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comprising to 20% in 2015. The bus shows the lowest rate where

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at 55% in 1985 and

declined

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declining

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to around 10% in 2015. The chart highlights a clear trend:

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the types of transportation used for travelling. The car,

in particular

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, stood out with a significantly higher rate.

While

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the bus remains the lowest

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

163 words

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The line graph shows the percentage of travels by 4 different transports in one country between 1985 and 2015

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Too much emphasis is given or educating of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that music is good way of bringin people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?