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The line chart provides information regarding the number of visitor to and from United Kingdom over two decades from 1979 to 1999 while the bar chart illustrates the country's popularity rated based on their UK visitors number.

The line chart provides information regarding the number of visitor to and from United Kingdom over two decades from 1979 to 1999 while the bar chart illustrates the country's popularity rated based on their UK visitors number.
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While
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 the line graph presents the
number
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 of
visitors
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 to and from the
UK
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 between 1979 and 1999, the bar chart illustrates how many
UK
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 residents visited the most five popular
countries
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 in 1999.
Overall
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, both numbers of
visitors
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 to and from the
UK
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 significantly increased over the given period with noticeable growth after 1984. The
number
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 of
UK
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 residents who travelled abroad was higher than that of
visitors
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 to the
UK
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 throughout the period. France was the most common choice for people in the
UK
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,
whereas
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 Turkey saw the least popularity. In terms of the
number
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 of
visitors
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, over 10
million
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UK
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 citizens visited other
countries
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 in 1979. Its figure experienced a slight increase to reach 20
million
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 after 1984 before dramatic growth was observed. In the final year, the
number
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 of
UK
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 people who visited abroad peaked at over 50
million
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. A similar trend was clearly seen for
visitors
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 to the
UK
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. The
number
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 stood at 10
million
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 in 1979, grew moderately, and sharply surged to nearly 30
million
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 by 1999.
For
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Of
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 the
countries
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 where
UK
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 citizens visited in 1999, France was the most popular, accounting for over 10
million
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visitors
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, followed by Spain making up just under 10
million
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. The remaining
countries
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 (USA, Greece, and Turkey) comprised no more than 5
million
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 which was significantly lower than the
number
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 of those two dominant
countries
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, uk, countries, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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