The line graph shows the percentage of travels by 4 different transports in one country between 1985 and 2015

The line graph compares the four different modes of transportation used for travelling by a country between 1985 and 2015.

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, it can be seen that the popularity of cars increased exponentially whilst the usage of buses sharply decreased. Other modes of transportation were almost constant.

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with, in 1985 almost 30% of travellers preferred car and its hype doubled in 1990 and continued to rise till the beginning of

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, travellers used cars less, yet it was the most used form of transportation till the end of the period when almost 70% of them used a car. In regards to rail, 20% of people chose rail, its popularity fluctuated between 1995 and 2005. Surprisingly,

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of the period as well the same population used rail.

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, the preference for the bus was sharply decreased.

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the beginning of the period more than 50% of folks used the bus for travelling

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it plunged to less than 15% between the years 2002 and 2005. In 2015 less than 10% of travel was made via bus. Less than 10% of the people chose other modes of travel at all times.