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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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, most of the countries experienced a significant increase in the total amount of milk being produced over the 30 years,
while
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 only Australia is decreasing. A significant production output increase in Guatemala, which recorded
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69% increments after Tanzania by 43% in 2010.
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 increment is shown since 1990,
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 the amount of litres has increased gradually for both countries, in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Other countries
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 as the Netherlands remain steady, growing at 1.7% in 2010 after declining in 2000.
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 the rest, Australia, is the only country that recorded a decrease
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 production by around 20% since 1990.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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