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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide key information about the marital
status
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 of the
populations
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 of Canada and Australia. The
uints
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units
 are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the highest percentages of marital
status
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 in both Canada and Australia are for
the
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apply
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couples
which
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who
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sperarated
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separated
 but not divorced.
In addition
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, in Australia, the married
status
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 has
reach
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reached
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 almost half of the
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populations
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population
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by
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apply
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almost 46%,
whereas
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divorced
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the divorced
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status
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 had the lowest
propotion
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proportion
 of the
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populations
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population
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 at 2%.
According to
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 what is shown, the widowed
status
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 is 6% of the
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populations
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population
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by
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apply
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almost 46%. The single
status
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 has a small
propotion
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proportion
by
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of
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 5%. In terms of
Canda
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Canada
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,
the
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apply
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couples who are divorced, and married from the same sex
has
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have
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 the lowest percentage of the
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populations
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population
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 at 1% and 3% respectively.
Morever
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Moreover
, never married, and widowed
status
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 had the same percentage at 7% of the
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populations
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population
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words status, populations with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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