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(2024) You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/ her to do give me band and transcript

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
letter
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 regarding the loss of a critical paper in the room which I stayed
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last
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in last
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 night.
The room
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Room
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 number 405 was allotted to me; it had two rooms and a window which overlooked a beach. I rested there for about 3 days owning to my business meeting I had to leave on Thursday. Even though I packed my luggage on Wednesday, the documents were left in the kitchen. I had not realized until I reached home.
Due to
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 late night dinner
while
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 working on the
project
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 I might have left the compilation on the kitchen table. Those files were crucial for my work as it
contains
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 all the meeting information. I would not be able to any seminar if I do not get those documents. I would really appreciate
if
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 you could send those
file
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files
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 when you find
it
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them
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. You can send it by post to the same address which I use in the registration process. Yours sincerely, Jojo

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task achievement
Consider providing a more detailed description of the documents for better context.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use transition phrases to guide the reader through your points more clearly.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure to proofread for minor grammatical errors to improve clarity and professionalism.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which is appropriate for formal correspondence.
task achievement
Your writing conveys a sense of urgency regarding the importance of the lost documents, which adds to the tone of the letter.
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