You want to join a local club or organization. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter: - Introduce yourself and explain why you are interested. - Ask about membership requirements. - Enquire about the next meeting or event.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

this

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letter finds you well and in good spirits. I am writing

this

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letter to

asking

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ask

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about

membership

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Jazz

Correct article usage

the Jazz

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club

Capitalize word

Club

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. I am Alexa, 30 years old. I'm just moving to

this

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town, I saw an

advertises

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on Facebook about

local

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a local

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club

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and I think your

club

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is so interesting because I'm interested in local

musics

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music

kinds of music

pieces of music

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. I used to play

paino

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piano

when I was young and I really want to do it again.

Therefore

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, I would like to become a

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membership

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member

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of your

club

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so, may I have

a questions

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questions

a question

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Correct subject-verb agreement

follows

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; 1. How to apply to your

club

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? 2. How much for

membership

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fees? 3. What

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are

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the benefits of

membership

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However

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, I would like to join your event to see your activities and

performing

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performance

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. Could you please give me

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apply

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details about your next

performing

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performance

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, I would like to know the date and time of the shows and where

would

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apply

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you perform

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I am looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully Alexa

khaonoona.supzTue Apr 22 2025

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grammar

Make sure to use correct verb forms (e.g., 'asking' should be 'ask').

structure

Try to group similar ideas together in the same paragraph to enhance coherence.

clarity

Consider rephrasing questions for clarity, such as 'What are the benefits of membership?'.

tone

Your introduction is friendly and sets a positive tone.

engagement

You included a good range of questions which indicate your interest.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

171 words

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