The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphic illustrates how
electricity
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generates
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is generated
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in Ireland, and the table below demonstrates the main reasons for using electric power in the same region.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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electricity
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was the most consumed by heating and lighting, as
it showed
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shown
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in the table.
Besides
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that, the pie chart shows that coal and gas
is
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are
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the most manufactured in generating
electro
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electron
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energy as well.
In the
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The
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table below describes what
do
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people from Ireland spend the most energy on, and one of the biggest results is heating, with 55%, and lighting
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that
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which
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is 35% lower. In the chart was demonstrated data about creating
electricity
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, which coal and gas took the highest place with 45.00% and 35.00% In conclusion,
the
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apply
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coal and
the
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gas borrowed the biggest proportion of the 100% pie in the picture. Meanwhile, others lower than 20%, and
informations
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of the second picture as well, with only 55% of
electricity
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for heating among other things.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
  • residential sector
  • industrial sector
  • commercial sector
  • trends
  • changes over time
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