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The table illustrates the cost of three environmental projects for sustainable forestry in the next five years. The pie chart, on the other hand, depicts four sectors allocated in the project in the first year.

The table illustrates the cost of three environmental projects for sustainable forestry in the next five years. The pie chart, on the other hand, depicts four sectors allocated in the project in the first year.
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The table presents
the
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information about the projected costs of three environmental projects for sustainable forestry over the next five
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year
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,
while
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 the pie chart illustrates the percentage of
budget
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the budget
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 allocation
of
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 the
first
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 setup
year
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.
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,
South-east
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 Asia will be the area that requires
highest
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 expenditures, followed by Central America, and West Africa. In the
first
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year
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,
set-up
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 cost will
charge
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 the highest cost among all expenses. In terms of the projected costs across three projects,
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 Asia is forecasted to be the most expensive one, requiring between 20 to 50 million USD each
year
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 which is far higher than those of
other
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 two areas. Central
Ameriaca
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America
 and West Africa will spend most of their budgets in the
first
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year
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, planned at 20 and 10.5 million USD respectively. After the
first
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year
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, funds allocated
into
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 these two projects will decrease, paying only 2.5 to 12 million USD to cover their expenditures. For money allocated in the
first
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year
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, the majority of money will be paid for set-up, comprising 50% of the total budget. Salaries will be the second-highest costly expenditure which is planned to account for 30%. The remaining categories, training and office expenses, are projected to cost
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the same proportion
for
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 10% each.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, first with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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