The charts below describe 4 sectors of employment, in 2009 and 2020, in two towns. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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employees

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4 different departments of employment in 2009 and 2020, in two towns.

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, in

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period, the two towns relied on different sectors of industrial structures. Manufacturing replaced engineering and became the dominant industry in

town

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A,

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B had a more balanced industrial development. In

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A, in 2009, engineering was the major department with 60% of workers choosing

staying

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in it, followed by manufacturing accounting for 20%.

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, hospitality and teaching displayed similar rates at 11% and 9% respectively. By 2020, most

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were employed by manufacturing, at 60%, with a noticeable decrease

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engineering to 17%.

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the proportion of

hosipitality

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hospitality

rose to 15%, the figures

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teaching dropped to 8%.

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town

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B, the choices

making

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by

employees

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showed an

opppsite

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opposite

pattern in 2009. The percentage of manufacturing was the largest at 40%, and 30% of

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workforces

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workforce

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prefer

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to

working

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work

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at

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engineering.

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, there was 15% of workers employed

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hospitality and 10%

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teaching. In the subsequent 11 years, the development of the four departments became more balanced. The percentage of engineering remained initial level, ranking

the

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first,

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but the rates of

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in manufacturing

fall

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to 25%.

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, the percentages of workers opting

hospitality

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for hospitality

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and teaching rose to the same, both at 20%.