The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this tim

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this tim
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this tim
The chart below provides data about the
number
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of
households
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in the US by their annual
income
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in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Clearly, we can see that there
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a growth in higher-
income
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households
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over the years,
while
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the
number
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of lower-
income
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house
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households
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holds
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relatively at the same level or declined. In 2007, the highest
number
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of
households
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fell into the $25,000–$49,999
income
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bracket, with just under 30 million. The second most common was the $50,000–$74,999 range,
while
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fewer
households
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earned less than $25,000 or more than $100,000. By 2011, the
number
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of
households
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in the lower two
income
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brackets ($25,000–$49,999 and less than $25,000) remained fairly constant,
while
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those earning $100,000 or more showed a noticeable increase. In 2015 the
number
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of
households
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in the highest
income
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bracket had grown significantly.
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, other categories
also
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saw a rise.
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hand
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the lowest group had slightly declined. In summary, the data suggests that from 2007 to 2015 the
number
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of
households
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increased gradually.
However
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those in lower-
income
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groups either declined.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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