The chart below illustrates the proportion of change in the share of global students amid university graduates in different Canadian states among 2001 and 2006.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below illustrates the proportion of change in the share of global students amid university graduates in different Canadian states among 2001 and 2006.

The chart reflects international graduates from Canadian universities from 2001 and 2006. It reflects the percentage that those students represent in some cities. First of all, in 2001, New Brunswick had the principal concentration of international graduates with above 5%, followed by Nova Scotia and Quebec, both of them with over 5% too. In the case of Alberta, British Columbia, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, they were under 5%. The one that had the least was Ontario with less than 5%.

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, in 2006, 3 cities achieved beyond 10% of international graduates. British Columbia had the biggest growth, duplicating its figure. Despite

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increase, New Brunswick remained the lead city.

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, Nova Scotia was

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one of them.

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, Ontario stayed the lowest city with a share lower than 5%.

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, between 2001 and 2006, all the referred Canadian cities augmented their shares of international students. Most of them kept their ratios in those five years, except for the surpassing delta of British Columbia.

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