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WThe line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

WThe line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the number of coffee
that trading
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traded
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to
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in
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 3 countries
like
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apply
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Brazil
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, Colombia,
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Costa
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and Costa
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rica
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Rica
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 for 1 decade from 2002 to 2012. Units are
meausure
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measured
measure
 in
kilograms
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 (millions).
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the rate of
export
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exports
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 in
3
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the 3
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countries
were fluctuating
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fluctuated
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 but
in
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at
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 the end of
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period
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the period
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had
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there was
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 an increase. At the outset, Colombia had a rise to more than 10
kilograms
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 in 2006, by followed year,
fall
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fell
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 immediately to
approxiamately
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approximately
 under 5
kilograms
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 in 2006, but the rest of the
period
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 showed
climb
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a climb
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 dramatically to 15
kilograms
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.
In addition
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,
Costa
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rica
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Rica
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 was in first place at the beginning
fo
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of
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 the
period
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 accounting for 15
kilograms
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 had the decline
that
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apply
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cross power
export
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exports
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Brazil
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from Brazil
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 and Colombia to just above 5
kilograms
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 in 2006
that
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apply
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made
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making
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Costa
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rica
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Rica
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 end up with
third
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a third
the third
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 place
of
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in
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exports
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export
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 rate even
thought
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though
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Costa
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rica
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Rica
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 showed recovery and grow to 20
kilograms
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 in 2012. In 2002,
Brazil
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 started the proportion of
export
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exports
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 with just above 10
kilograms
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. over the
period
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,
Brazil
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 had a rise until the end
period
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 accounting for 25
kilograms
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 with minimal decline before
reached
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reaching
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 its peak at
approxiamately
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approximately
 just under 20
kilograms
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 in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brazil, costa, rica, kilograms, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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