A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you about how important

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apply

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this

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job as I am unemployed and I have some financial issues. I am interested in

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post and

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I have one

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experience

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was advertise

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in our local newspaper. I

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working in

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hotel as

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a house

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house keeping

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for one year and know how to deal with

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the customer

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customer

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during any events, parties, and family dinner

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. My communication skills are good so, in

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hotel

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was working

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in the field of customer service. I am flexible with any shifts and available

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any working hours.

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, I think I am eligible for

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post as per

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experience and qualifications. I will request

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an interview or a meeting to discuss your application

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. It will be so kind of you. I am looking forward to your kind response as soon as possible! Your's

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, Adam

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coherence and cohesion

Provide a clearer structure with distinct paragraphs for your introduction, body, and closing. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve readability.

task achievement

Use a more formal tone in your wording to suit a job application, for example, replace 'so, in previous hotel' with 'Additionally, in my previous role'.

task achievement

You've clearly stated your interest in the position and provided relevant experience, which is good for task achievement.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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