The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.

The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.
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The two
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represent the
usage
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of energy in the United States in a span of ten years starting
on
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1980.
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the given information showed that Oil was used as
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of
power
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was
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primarly
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primarily
primary
despite the
decreasement
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decrease
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its
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in that decade,
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an
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increase
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other fonts of
power
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is indicated in the same period of time. In the first chart the
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of Oil as
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of
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was 42% and in the second one declined to 33%, in the same
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natural gas adoption lost only
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1% starting from 26%.
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the graphs illustrated an
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increment
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usage
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the usage
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of Coal,
that
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was 22% in 1980 and arrived
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27% in 1990,
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the utilization of nuclear energy in
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USA at the beginning was 5% and doubled after
thr
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the
considered period of time. Only
power
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obtained by water remained constant with a value of 5% of all used energy.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words usage, power with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • sources of energy
  • predominant
  • renewables
  • nuclear
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • technological advancements
  • policy changes
  • trends
  • overall
  • preference
  • shifts
  • implications
  • future energy landscape
  • decades
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