You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter •explain why you have moved •describe the new house •invite your friend to come and visit
Dear John,
I am writing Project manager at Aceme Enterprise.
you
to give you Change preposition
to you
two
good news Correct determiner usage
some
firstly
, I have moved to Linking Words
london
. Change the capitalization
London
Secondly
, I relocated for a job Linking Words
of
Change preposition
as
Correct article usage
a
This
was my dream job and I longed for Linking Words
this
position. Linking Words
finally
, my hard work paid off.
I have rented Linking Words
an
studio Change the article
a
apartmnet
in Central London, where my company is located. I wanted to reside near Correct your spelling
apartment
apartments
to
my company to reduce commute time. The house is modern, Change preposition
apply
recently
constructed with updated amenities and features. Correct word choice
and recently
Moreover
, the view from my apartment is surreal.
I am so excited to give you a tour of my house, and Linking Words
also
can't wait to meet you I have lots to talk about. Linking Words
Lets
catch up, We can meet at my house and play video games. Let me know if Replace the word
Let's
Let us
Correct article usage
the upcomming
upcomming
weekend works Correct your spelling
upcoming
for
.
Best,
JohnCorrect pronoun usage
for you
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coherence and cohesion
Improve the logical flow of the letter by ensuring each paragraph follows a clear structure and transitions smoothly from one idea to the next.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure your greetings and closing statements have correct punctuation and structure (e.g. ‘Dear John,’ instead of ‘Dear John,’ and ‘Let me know if the upcoming weekend works for you.’).
task achievement
Include a bit more detail about the job role and why it is your dream job to provide a fuller response to the task. This will enhance your task achievement score.
task achievement
Consider using more varied vocabulary and sentence structures to demonstrate a richer language use, which can improve your overall tone.
task achievement
You effectively communicated the reasons for your move and your excitement about the job, which adds a personal touch to the letter.
task achievement
You successfully invited your friend to visit and included a suggestion for what to do, which was engaging.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,